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Darth Vader mourns the loss of his loved one, Padmé Amidala. The quote is by Anakin when he first awakes after his full transformation to the Dark Lord of the Sith, Darth Vader. Here is the full dialogue between him and Darth Sidious when he awakes after his medical treatment:
DARTH SIDIOUS hovers around the periphery of a group of MEDICAL DROIDS who are working on ANAKIN. DARTH SIDIOUS paces in the foreground. A DROID approaches the Dark Lord.
MEDICAL DROID: "My Lord, the construction is finished ... he lives."
DARTH SIDIOUS: "Good. Good."
The DROID moves back to the table where DARTH VADER lies. The table begins to move upright. DARTH SIDIOUS moves in next to DARTH VADER.
DARTH SIDIOUS: (continuing) "Lord Vader, can you hear me?"
DARTH VADER, with his dark mask and helmet, moves up into the frame until he is in a CLOSEUP.
DARTH VADER: "Yes, My Master."
DARTH VADER looks around the room.
DARTH VADER: (continuing) "Where is Padme? Is she safe, is she all right?"
DARTH SIDIOUS moves closer to the half machine/half man.
DARTH SIDIOUS: "I'm afraid she died. ... it seems in your anger, you killed her."
A LOW GROAN emanates from Vader's mask. Suddenly everything in the room begins to implode, including some of the DROIDS.
DARTH VADER: "I couldn't have! She was alive! I felt her! She was alive! It's impossible! No!!!"
VADER SCREAMS, breaks his bonds to the table, and steps forward, waving his hands, causing objects to fly around the room. SIDIOUS deflects the objects, but some of the DROIDS aren't so lucky. VADER'S PAINFUL SCREAMS echo throughout the Center.
Anakin and Padme... a tragic love story....
ANYWAYS! MOVING ON!